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 * [[/Lin Parker/]] - Fairly rich kid, family has a big house with a pool on the edge of town. Two maids. Threw a party on Monday night.
 ** [[/Josh Eversen/]] - Tanned boy from Lin's party. Lorna's struggling to resist hormones around him. Pretty good on a skateboard; drives a sportscar, but nothing like Serena's status symbol.
-*** [[/Garth/]] - One of Josh's friends; family runs a liquor wholesale company, so he brings the booze
+*** [[/Garth Wenkler/]] - One of Josh's friends; family runs a liquor wholesale company, so he brings the booze
 *** [[/Ste/]] - One of Josh's friends. Has access to [[/Skim/]].
 *** [[/Mitch Rivera/]] - One of Josh's friends. Has a pleasant tenor voice but his laugh could be taken for a girl. Nate's big brother.

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 ==Characters==
 * [[/Lorna Peen/]] - narrator and main character, who is given an infantilising injections
-** [[/Marcie/]] - Lorna's friend with excessive, overbearing parents
+** [[/Marcie Miller/]] - Lorna's friend with excessive, overbearing parents
-** [[/Elspeth/]] - Lorna's friend and Marcie's gf. Tends to go off the deep end when something makes her angry. Wants to study molecular biology in college
+** [[/Elspeth Gordon/]] - Lorna's friend and Marcie's gf. Tends to go off the deep end when something makes her angry. Wants to study molecular biology in college
 ** [[/Jodie/]] - Lorna's friend
 ** [[/Nikki/]] - Lorna's friend

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 * [[/Lorna Peen/]] - narrator and main character, who is given an infantilising injections
 ** [[/Marcie/]] - Lorna's friend with excessive, overbearing parents
-*** [[/Elspeth/]] - Lorna's friend and Marcie's gf. Tends to go off the deep end when something makes her angry. Wants to study molecular biology in college
+** [[/Elspeth/]] - Lorna's friend and Marcie's gf. Tends to go off the deep end when something makes her angry. Wants to study molecular biology in college
 ** [[/Jodie/]] - Lorna's friend
 ** [[/Nikki/]] - Lorna's friend
 *** [[/Lance/]] - Nikki's boyfriend
 * [[/Andy Becker/]] - A local pharmacist who hates Lorna
 ** [[/Todd Becker/]] - A school bully who Lorna managed to outwit
 *** [[/Nate Rivera/]] - Not one of Todd's gang, but on the football team with him. Kind of looks up to Todd. Terrible gossip.
 *** [[/Clint Walsh/]] - at school with Lorna; from Barbados originally, still has an accent, but his family have moved all over the world. Was beaten up by Todd's gang but won't give up on his dream to be a skateboarder. Uses his brother's board, which was a gift and has some emotional significance.
 * [[/Mrs Yuan/]] - Owns a hat/accessory shop, "The Hat Trick". In the mall one level below Becker's pharmacy, just visible across the atrium. Several of her former assistants now run branches in other nearby towns.
 * [[/Lin Parker/]] - Fairly rich kid, family has a big house with a pool on the edge of town. Two maids. Threw a party on Monday night.

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 * [[/Andy Becker/]] - A local pharmacist who hates Lorna
 ** [[/Todd Becker/]] - A school bully who Lorna managed to outwit
 *** [[/Clint Walsh/]] - at school with Lorna; from Barbados originally, still has an accent, but his family have moved all over the world. Was beaten up by Todd's gang but won't give up on his dream to be a skateboarder. Uses his brother's board, which was a gift and has some emotional significance.
 * [[/Mrs Yuan/]] - Owns a hat/accessory shop, "The Hat Trick". In the mall one level below Becker's pharmacy, just visible across the atrium. Several of her former assistants now run branches in other nearby towns.
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 *** [[/Garth/]] - One of Josh's friends; family runs a liquor wholesale company, so he brings the booze
 *** [[/Ste/]] - One of Josh's friends. Has access to [[/Skim/]].
 Lorna's parents are [[/John Peen|John]] and [[/Marsha Peeen|Marsha]], and she has a little brother called [[/Walther Peen|Walt]].

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 | Floodgate || Causes sporadic bedwetting || Progressively weakens pelvic floor muscles, making accidents more likely with a full bladder || Complete loss of bladder control
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 | Innocent || Reduces arousal and sexual stimulation; only available for kids who are being punished for something explicit || Increased reduction in arousal; inhibits certain hormones (may delay puberty). After any booster, is likely to cause impotence in boys || Complete lack of arousal or sexual pleasure. Treated very carefully as these effects can become permenant
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 | Sux2B || Causes mild oral fixation; patients may start to feel uncomfortable without something in their mouth, and unconsciously start sucking or chewing on anything that comes to hand || Harder to avoid sucking things; sucking anything placed near your mouth is almost a compulsion || Extreme discomfort from the mouth being empty; unable to resist sucking whatever comes to hand. Often causes involuntary thumb sucking
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 | VaporWork || Affects the combination of senses linked to short-term memory. A subject's teachers should all give approval before giving this dose, in order to avoid disruption to schoolwork. There are a couple of variations which affect retention in different ways. Generally, teachers should present information in writing, images, and speech; ensuring that lessons are still retained. But anything that arrives only through one sense, such as audible or text conversations, is more likely to be forgotten. This can be adjusted as to which single sense it impacts. || Subject's recall of single-sense learning fades dramatically; meaning that they will often completely forget conversations with friends. Each booster increases the chance of forgetting, and reduces the time it will remain in their working memory || Subject is completely incapable of remembering anything they hear for longer that two minutes unless they both hear and read it. This effectively prevents them doing any activity other than schoolwork effectively; and so extreme caution should be used with boosters.
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-I'll add others when I have time
+I'll add others when I have time. There are 12 here, and I think Serena said there are 23 available. So any ideas for the other 11 would be appreciated; I'd like to have them on the list, even if they're not used in the story.
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 ! Dose name !! Normal effect !! Intensifier effect !! Overloaded boosters
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-! Antidex || Reduces coordination, requiring concentration to type || Even harder to type, and increases clumsiness. Balance may be impaired after multiple boosters || Can only handle objects by grasping; probably unable to walk or stand without help
+| Antidex || Reduces coordination, requiring concentration to type || Even harder to type, and increases clumsiness. Balance may be impaired after multiple boosters || Can only handle objects by grasping; probably unable to walk or stand without help
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-! Diffusion || Evolves nitrogen gas in the large intestine, causing frequent bloating and flatulence || Patient must pass gas more often, and may smell worse. In some patients may cause occasional diarrhea and nausea, and may sometimes cause accidents || near-constant involuntary flatulence and spontaneous (usually once or twice daily) incontinence
+| Diffusion || Evolves nitrogen gas in the large intestine, causing frequent bloating and flatulence || Patient must pass gas more often, and may smell worse. In some patients may cause occasional diarrhea and nausea, and may sometimes cause accidents || near-constant involuntary flatulence and spontaneous (usually once or twice daily) incontinence
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-! Floodgate || Causes sporadic bedwetting || Progressively weakens pelvic floor muscles, making accidents more likely with a full bladder || Complete loss of bladder control
+| Floodgate || Causes sporadic bedwetting || Progressively weakens pelvic floor muscles, making accidents more likely with a full bladder || Complete loss of bladder control
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-! Loquaciousness || Causes a lisp, which may make you hard to understand for some people || Less control of tongue and vocal folds; a growing speech impediment. For an hour or so after the booster, subjects may be unable to speak at all, but they can usually learn to be understood again with some effort || Unable to speak except in baby talk. Muscle interference changes randomly so there's no way to adapt to it
+| Loquaciousness || Causes a lisp, which may make you hard to understand for some people || Less control of tongue and vocal folds; a growing speech impediment. For an hour or so after the booster, subjects may be unable to speak at all, but they can usually learn to be understood again with some effort || Unable to speak except in baby talk. Muscle interference changes randomly so there's no way to adapt to it
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-! PearShape || Causes lethargy, weight gain, and changes body fat distribution to make it more obvious || increased weight, decreased energy, increased perspiration || Uncontrolled weight gain, loss of muscle tone
+| PearShape || Causes lethargy, weight gain, and changes body fat distribution to make it more obvious || increased weight, decreased energy, increased perspiration || Uncontrolled weight gain, loss of muscle tone
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-! SkinDeep || Causes acne and itching || Spreads to more parts of the body; for some subjects can mutate into an eczema-like rash || whole body covered with acne
+| SkinDeep || Causes acne and itching || Spreads to more parts of the body; for some subjects can mutate into an eczema-like rash || whole body covered with acne
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-! Sux2B || Causes mild oral fixation; patients may start to feel uncomfortable without something in their mouth, and unconsciously start sucking or chewing on anything that comes to hand || Harder to avoid sucking things; sucking anything placed near your mouth is almost a compulsion || Extreme discomfort from the mouth being empty; unable to resist sucking whatever comes to hand. Often causes involuntary thumb sucking
+| Sux2B || Causes mild oral fixation; patients may start to feel uncomfortable without something in their mouth, and unconsciously start sucking or chewing on anything that comes to hand || Harder to avoid sucking things; sucking anything placed near your mouth is almost a compulsion || Extreme discomfort from the mouth being empty; unable to resist sucking whatever comes to hand. Often causes involuntary thumb sucking
 |}